Finding faults

The beatles - Yer blues (2009 stereo Remaster)
The instruments in the song is slightly panning to the left and it should be in the lift. The song should be straight in the middle. The drum beat is panned to the left about 50 degrees when it should be in the middle, because it's the main instrumenti n the song. In 1:32 it randomly echoes when it shouldn't be like that. The vocals should be turned up more. The bass should be in the middle and not panned 15 degrees to the left, the reason why it should be in the middle is because the bass is one of the main instruments as well, it gives drums a boost and a bit of bass to it. Another fault is that the guitar lead should be in the middle and not panned because it's the main melody in the song, the melody is something for the audience to remember it by. The drums should be louder than the other instruments that's playing. In my opinion (if this was made using with Logic)  the drums should be panned to the middle and not the left - the drums are the one that keeps in time with the track, the guitar that's panned on the right should be panned in the middle, the vocals should be compressed. The reason why the vocals should be compressed is so that the vocals could have a better quality in the song... the echoes should be taken off because it just came out randomly - also the echoes made the vocals a bit quiter.

Love - You set the scene
There's a big problem in this song as the main melody is panned to the right at 50 degrees, when it should be in the middle also it's very low, since it's the melody - it should be panned in the middle and it should be turned up more louder, the reason why this is a problem because as the song starts people wouldn't think that their earphone/headphone is not working on the left side.
The bass and the drum beat should not be panned on the left so much, this is called a " hardcore pan " , this makes the track really empty in the middle. At the moment there's so much space in the middle that only the vocals are there, although the vocals are in the right spot... there's too much emptyness and another fault is that vocals needs to be louder as well. At 5:15 the drums comes off time with the bass...
What I think the producer should of done is that, they should of panned the drum beat in the middle, the bass in the middle, the guitar (melody) in the middle and the vocals in the middle. While the other instruments are panned either to the left or right. This means that the main things are in the middle and there's space in the track for other instruments playing, but they shouldn't be panned to much only atleast 20 degrees to either the left or right.

I live in a dream
In this track the vocals needs to be louder because the vocals are what the audience is going to remember the song by. The drums needs to be EQed as the bass of the drums are quite low, they should be EQed using the Top shelve by just a bit so the drums doesn't clip/distort.